This was a strange book. Not really a bad one, but, at nearly
400 pages in length, the first half felt like a succession of short stories
about various African hunting safaris in the years just before the First World
War. Former US President Theodore Roosevelt and his son Kermit have sizeable
roles to play out on safari but amount to absolutely nothing once the real plot
started to unfurl itself.
Smith’s main character is Leon Courtney, whose unnamed
father is presumably Ryder Courtney from ‘The Triumph of the Sun’ and whose named
uncle is Penrod Ballantyne, another character from the novel about Khartoum –
which, I will say here, was much more focused than Assegai.
Only with about one hundred and twenty pages left did the real
story unfold: the nefarious plotting of a German entrepreneur to combine the
forces of Kaiser Wilhelm’s armies with the still-disenchanted Boer rebels in an
effort to overthrow British rule in Africa. Even then, there was plenty of
hunting to be done. Bad guys, good guys, in-between guys, they all hunted!
Easily half the book was devoted to the killing of one animal or another.
For some reason, Smith wound up the climactic final scenes
very quickly, in comparison to the multiple depictions of safaris, which
stretched for page after page. It made the ending far less climactic than it
should have been.
Like I wrote about The
Triumph of the Sun, Smith obviously loves Africa – in the way that Tom
Clancy loves his technology – and it shows in how he writes about tribal life.
It’s fascinating at first, but there’s only so many tribal gatherings I can
read about before I start skipping pages. Same goes for Clancy and his techno
love, too.
If you’re going to advertise the book being about a World
War One plot by the Germans, then actually tell that story. Lo and behold,
Courtney meets a woman, and the pages Smith dedicates to their courtship comes
in second behind only the pages dedicated to the safaris. It felt like the
German plot to ally with the Boers against the British was only thrown in as an
afterthought, something to pass the time between
Like I said, a strange nook. Could have been better.
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